Using punctuation to set off
nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements
Lesson Plan
Student______Thomas
Malinowski____________Professor_____Dr.
Nenchin___
Course
___EDU 542___Date____5/5/15______Grade__6__
Topic: Using punctuation to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical
elements_Content Area__ELA_
Instructional Objective(s)
After
a lesson on how to use punctuation (commas,
parentheses, dashes) to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements, the
students will complete a worksheet by correctly using commas, parentheses, and
dashes to set off nonrestrictive elements within sentences with no more than
three errors.
STANDARDS AND INDICATORS
L.6.2a. Use
punctuation (commas, parentheses, dashes) to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical
elements.
- Indicator: This will be
evident throughout the course of the lesson when the students learn,
practice, and write sentences using punctuation to offset nonrestrictive
elements.
W.6.5. With some guidance and support from peers and adults,
develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing,
rewriting, or trying a new approach.
- Indicator:
This will be evident when the students have to write examples on their own
using punctuation to offset nonrestrictive parenthetical elements.
MOTIVATION
The students will watch a brief PowerPoint presentation
about the importance of a comma.
MATERIALS
- Smart
Board
- PowerPoint
- Computer
- Youtube
video
- Worksheets
- Sentence
Strips
- Velcro
STRATEGIES
Direct Instruction: When the teacher shows the students step
by step how to use punctuation to offset nonrestrictive elements.
Kinesthetic Learning:
When the students come up to the Smart Board to complete the examples,
and when they place the commas, parentheses, and dashes on the Velcro strips.
Cooperative Learning:
Working in groups to decide where the Velcro commas, parentheses, and
dashes go.
Visual Learning: the PowerPoint presentations and the You
Tube video.
ADAPTATIONS
The student with visual impairment will be permitted to move
her seat closer to the board during the PowerPoint presentations and the You
Tube video.
The groups for the Velcro activity will be heterogeneous
groups based on reading ability.
The teacher will read the words from the video aloud for the
students who struggle with reading.
DIFFERENTIATION OF INSTRUCTION
Tier 1: After a lesson on how to use punctuation (commas, parentheses, dashes) to set off
nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements, the students complete a worksheet by
correctly using commas, parentheses, and dashes to set off nonrestrictive
elements within sentences with no more than five errors
Tier 2: After a lesson on how to use punctuation (commas, parentheses, dashes) to set off
nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements, the students complete a worksheet by
correctly using commas, parentheses, and dashes to set off nonrestrictive
elements within sentences with no more than three errors
Tier 3: After a lesson on how to use punctuation (commas, parentheses, dashes) to set off
nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements, the students complete a worksheet by
correctly using commas, parentheses, and dashes to set off nonrestrictive
elements within sentences with no more than one error.
DEVELOPMENTAL PROCEDURES
Students will watch a video on You Tube, Commas: Nonessential Information. (What is nonessential information? What information is essential?)
Through direct instruction the teacher will show
students how to use punctuation to offset nonrestrictive elements. (What are commas, parentheses, and
dashes? How can I use them to fix a
sentence?)
Students will come up to the board and practice
finding what information is nonrestrictive, and they will add appropriate
punctuation. (Which information is nonessential?
What can I add to offset this information?)
Students will work in groups with sentence strips
and Velcro commas, parentheses, and dashes to correctly offset the
nonrestrictive elements. (Where does the punctuation belong? Does the sentence still make sense if this
part were to be taken out?)
Students will complete a worksheet in which they
must properly use punctuation to offset nonrestrictive elements, and write
sentences on their own including commas, parentheses, and dashes to offset
these elements. (What information in each sentence can be
offset with punctuation? What is a
sentence that I can write that include nonrestrictive elements being offset by
punctuation?)
ASSESSMENT
The students will be assessed based on how accurately they
use punctuation to offset nonrestrictive elements on the final worksheet (no
more than three errors).
INDEPENDENT PRACTICE
After a lesson on offsetting nonrestrictive elements of a
sentence using commas, parentheses, and dashes, the students will go on a scavenger hunt, in which they
must look through the novel we are reading in class to find examples of
punctuation being used to offset nonessential information.
FOLLOW-UP: DIRECT TEACHER INTERVENTION
AND ACADEMIC ENRICHMENT
Direct Teacher Intervention: For the students who struggled with this
lesson, the teacher will work with them using sentence scrambles to show which
part of a sentence is not essential.
This provides an alternative perspective, or another way to look at the
sentences for the struggling students.
Academic Enrichment: The students who excelled in the
understanding of this lesson will look through both their most recent essays,
as well as a peer’s most recent essay to correct any parts of the essays in
which nonrestrictive elements of a sentence were not offset by proper
punctuation.
TEACHER REFERENCES
Altenberg, E. P., & Vago,
R. (2012). English grammar: Understanding
the basics. Cambridge: Cambridge
University Press.
Anderson, J. (2005). Mechanically inclined: Building grammar, usage, and style into writer’s
workshop. Portland, ME: Stenhouse.
Commas: Nonessential Information. (n.d.). Retrieved from
Lock, G. (1996). Functional English grammar: An introduction for second language
teachers. Cambridge, UK:
Cambridge University Press.
The Comma - TIP Sheets - Butte College. (n.d.). Retrieved
from
Using Commas. (n.d.). Retrieved from https://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/Commas.html
The references that are in bold are the textbooks required
for this class. I used these references
to learn the information about my topic so that I could create a lesson on
it. I also used the website entitled
“The Comma” to do further research about the topic at hand, and I also used one
of the examples from this website in my PowerPoint. I utilized the website entitled, “Using
Commas” to find more examples to use in my PowerPoint and on the
worksheet. The final reference that is
listed is the YouTube video that I showed the class at the beginning of the
lesson to introduce the new comma rule.
It is entitled “Commas: Nonessential Information.”
Assessment
Name_____________________________ Date_______________
Directions:
Use the type of punctuation indicated to offset the nonrestrictive elements.
1). My brother John
who is a great golfer got a hole in one! (Commas)
2). The book Twilight
which was published in 2005 sold over a million copies. (Dashes)
3). The ferocious
lion who did not look pleased roared at everyone who was watching him.
(Parentheses)
4). The Yankees who
are on a roll right now won the series against the Mets. (Dashes)
5). John who has been
drinking should not drive. (Parenthesis)
6). We passed our childhood home which was full of many
great memories. (Comma)
7. Write your own
sentence in which you use parentheses to offset the nonrestrictive elements.
8. Write your own
sentence in which you use dashes to offset the nonrestrictive elements.
9. Write your own
sentence in which you use commas to offset the nonrestrictive elements.
Your mother must have a good sense of humor with all you kids and the joking and teasing that you probably subject her to. I think that the personal photos really got the students involved in commas. Everyone got the first 6 sentences right on the worksheet, and on the open-ended responses, they were mostly right but sometimes forgot the who/that/which part of the clauses. Still, it gave everyone 5 extra points on the final.
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